I have altered the title of The Retribution by increasing the intensity of the stroke making it slightly bolder, I also increased the size of the text by 20pt, this is as a result of the feedback that I was given on the social networking BBM, I added another coverline yet thought the magazine looked too compact and took too much attention away from the picture. Instead, I moved the text from the bottom slightly higher to the top meaning the bottom doesn't look too packed.
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