Research & Planning: Trailer improvements

After completing our mock trailer with the footage we recorded, we looked over our trailer and gathered feedback from the audience. From this research we have found that the improvements needed to be made mostly include presenting the narrative of the trailer in a much better way. We have thought that we could do this by maybe adding some additional clips, or titles and a voice over to explain what is happening throughout the trailer. Other improvements we plan to make, include filming the rest and deleting the animatic storyboard from the first draft of the trailer. We also plan to add some more sound, and making it match clearly to the trailer. We finally plan to add some more editing transitions as at the moment we don't really have that many included.